Persuasive Letter - I wanna baby monkey

WALT: write a persuasive letter

Dear Mrs Dower                    

I wanna baby monkey!

Its a good pet to have because It can be an inside pet or an outside pet and if it get's to noise we can put it outside where we can see him and it can play outside as well so that. A pet monkey wouldn't cost you anything. I will pay for the food it eats bananas and i will give you all the food it needs. I will make sure that all my work and my chores are done on time so that I can pay for the food.

The baby monkey could discipline the naughty people. I would clean the monkey and the cage asswell. We could put him/her in the garden outside the classroom and we could keep an eye on him/her.

The baby monkey could get the balls on the roof of the class and bring them down again. It would be different to all the other class. We would only let him/her out at class time but we would only have to let it out with someone we can trust so the he/she won't escape from the school to the city something could happen to him/her. So thats is why a baby monkey is the perfect pet for room one.

The End

By Bridget